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Friday 29 June 2012

Zooming Flame.

500 kilometres from the ground is and underground city where a smart tribe of over 1,000 people called the Snivealks live. They look like ordinary people but you can tell because they have a green mark at the back of their neck. But one ordinary Snivealk named Tevita has super powers that he used to save underground city but before we get to that I’ll have to tell you how he got the powers.

It all started at a school when they visited the most famous volcano called Gyser mountain at Central city. While the teacher was showing them around Tevita wandered off to take a closer look inside Gyser volcano. 2 bullies pushed him inside the volcano and he banged his head on a rock and got knocked out just before he got to the ground. He thought he was gonna die but when he reach the ground red, orange, and yellow light glowed around him and gave him extraordinary powers but remember he doesn’t know yet. Nearby a scientist spotted him and knew that he has powers and also knew that he’s a Snivealk and also knew how to take away his powers.

Before Tevita could wake up he took him to his evil lab locked him up in a place filled with rubber (properly an abandoned warehouse). The evil scientist went to get all his stuff ready to take away Tevita’s powers and use it for himself.. When he was gone Tevita woke and tried to break free but couldn’t so he got mad and suddenly the handcuffs melted. He was in shock. So now he knows how he can melt things but when he melted rubber it got sticky. When the evil scientist came back he was eager to find him gone. He knew that Tevita knows how to melt stuff. He found that his weakness is Rubber because it makes him sticky so that’s how he became Rubber man and Tevita took the name Zooming flame.

A week later Tevita learned how to control his powers and decided to face Rubber man but rubber man knew everything about zooming flame. Zooming flame was getting ready for the big battle by wearing his bright red, orange and yellow suit. Later he climbed up a mountain to the secret entrance next to a dam where they get fresh water. Outside rubber man managed to found a way in. Rubber man secretly stuck Zooming flames body to the ground accept for his head and said “prepare to watch your city get drowned mwahaha.”

Rubber man quickly ran to the dam and placed TNT bombs next to it getting ready to explode it but Zooming  flame had one more trick. He used super speed with his legs to dig a hole and ended up behind Rubber man and punch him in the face. Rubber man flew backwards got back up and shooted rubber at him but Zooming flame dodged it. He knocked out Rubber man with kick and he turned water into stone so it couldn’t flood underground city and rubber man was defeated and was put in jail. Underground city was far safe from danger but another dangerous villain awaits our hero.

Karate Kid comparison review.

WALT use our knowledge of narratives to compare movies and give our opinion with reasons to support it.

Did you know the movie Karate Kid was first made in 1984? We watched the original version, then we watched the new version to see how much was the same and how much had changed.

In the first movie the lead character’s name is Daniel. He moves from New Jersey to California with his Mum. Then he gets beaten up by a boy named Johnny. Days after that, Mr miyagi accidentally joined him to a karate tournament so he helps to teach him Karate to defeat Johnny.

In the second movie the lead character’s name is Dre. He moves from America to China with his Mum. On his first day in China, he gets beaten up by a chinese boy named cheng. Then the mechanic man named Mr Han accidentally joins Dre into a karate tournament so he agrees to teach Dre karate so he could defeat the Cheng.

I liked the original movie better. It is awesome because it has more drama and action. I give this movie a 3 out of 5 and it’s a good movie for the whole family to enjoy.