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Friday 22 February 2013

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Friends. Siblings. Family. All gathered around the park for a special reason. The boy’s birthday and he was doing a very special trick.

Climbing on top of a tree, hugging tight with fear and refusing to let go but still, fear wrapped around him like a snake.Soon he climbed. Higher. Still he could smell sausages, food and fresh air from up there.. As he got closer, he could smell BBQ smoke.

He looked down to see the ground laughing evilly at him and the tree shouting “Jump, Jump, Jump!” With a deep voice. The trampoline underneath, and to the right were people. Laughing and singing.



The boy heard a demon, dressed as his friend, asking him if he’s ready. Getting ready to push him off. He took a step forward. Tears running out of his eyes and it suddenly started raining. He took one step closer to the edge.

He took another step closer to the edge and he could taste blood even though he wasn't bleeding. He jumped off and the air inside his lungs tried escaping but he held it in. As he was falling, he did a double front flip and landed safely with a smile.

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